Thursday, April 08, 2010
First Kiss
When I lived here, there were only a few houses,
trees lined the streets
and the moon was enough to light up the field.
I always felt like everything was new,
I never felt abandoned like a stray dog.
Once when we were playing tag
I accidentally kissed her,
brushed my lips on hers,
made her cry and run away.
The following afternoon, I waited for dusk
hoping we would play again,
but she never came and I was a broken toy,
like a solitary animal watching other children play.
rolly
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trees lined the streets
and the moon was enough to light up the field.
I always felt like everything was new,
I never felt abandoned like a stray dog.
Once when we were playing tag
I accidentally kissed her,
brushed my lips on hers,
made her cry and run away.
The following afternoon, I waited for dusk
hoping we would play again,
but she never came and I was a broken toy,
like a solitary animal watching other children play.
rolly
Comments:
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but i am very much interested in arts too.I myself do sketching ,good i like your effort. I would be happy if you will give my blog a look too its www.capatainapoorv.blogspot.com
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